Ahh, your method of presentation is quite EPIC!
You have some real potential with these frame-by-frames. The fading in and out, and blank screens before action really make it feel like you're there watching it all. I'm really impressed. FFFFFF these auditions are making me wanna do stuff with Flash. So cool.
I'm sorry if I suck with words. I basically just really liked your audition and thought it was really effective. Kudos, my friend. x3